Why physicists are not writers: Exhibit A
This is the back cover of a college-level physics textbook. I can't get over how ridiculous the first sentence on the back cover is. It actually annoys me.
There are about fifty ways to phrase their topic sentence that do not sound ridiculous. For instance:
- See the world through the eyes of a physicist
- See the physics at work in the world
- See the world through the lens of physics (this has optics, so bonus points)